I'm having a rediculously hard time re-writing the beginning of my manuscript. Espeially the part where I introduce some of the key secondary characters. I was never really happy with the way I introduced them in the earlier version, but I'm struggling with how to get them to come in naturally now that I've made changes.
I'm also vacillatin on POV again! I'm thinking about writing it all in Milo's close third, with a few chapters in Farley's close 3rd POV when Milo's not around.
Must keep writing, get something on the page, work it out, wha wha wha!