I can't believe I'm already done with my dialogue revisions. I thought it would take all week. One concern is that I have severl passages where one of my mid-level characters bounce really short comments off of each other. I hope it doesn't come out soudnign choppy.
I also logged into my first #kidlitchat on twitter tonight. Very interesting. Some people seemed to be having their own conversation with no one in particular. I'm going ot have to bone up on my typing to be fast enough to chime in.